tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post3791973699024547467..comments2023-09-23T03:21:00.976-07:00Comments on The Black Dogs of Despair Crayon Room: Don't Touch - Friday FlashPanicswitchhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04074225770192887676noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-54445257334918289892009-09-11T01:01:28.289-07:002009-09-11T01:01:28.289-07:00I like a story where everyone ends up dead. Gives ...I like a story where everyone ends up dead. Gives it a little sprinkle of the Jacobean tragedy.dan powellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14131553102349479513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-28179547843410297262009-09-11T01:54:16.677-07:002009-09-11T01:54:16.677-07:00Hey Dan!I think Marco came out of it okay, but you...Hey Dan!<br><br>I think Marco came out of it okay, but you never know.Anton Gullyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14588240500026033295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-62026658019715549902009-09-11T04:28:55.330-07:002009-09-11T04:28:55.330-07:00I liked it. But I'm completely biased and my o...I liked it. But I'm completely biased and my opinion is not to be trusted, lmao!<br><br>It was probably pure rubbish and my positive feelings are nothing more than a side effect of endorphins and pheromones, lol.<br><br>;p<br><br>Although, Marco sounds hot. Maybe he's what is clouding my judgment?<br><br>;DKathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11410730283603224430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-34724954428957265482009-09-11T05:42:34.303-07:002009-09-11T05:42:34.303-07:00Or a side effect of hunger and exhaustion.Or a side effect of hunger and exhaustion.Anton Gullyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14588240500026033295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-85464586141310975942009-09-11T05:48:33.916-07:002009-09-11T05:48:33.916-07:00Good story. A lot of stuff happened is such a smal...Good story. A lot of stuff happened is such a small apace.Alan W. Davidsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-31785954657020337042009-09-11T06:07:54.441-07:002009-09-11T06:07:54.441-07:00Using 25 words instead of 50! Though mainly throug...Using 25 words instead of 50! Though mainly through laziness and lack of good word stuff.Anton Gullyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14588240500026033295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-81924586831217438822009-09-11T09:11:24.582-07:002009-09-11T09:11:24.582-07:00Marco is a true mastermind. Good story! So, was th...Marco is a true mastermind. Good story! So, was the poison on the file?Laura Enohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-80442075188360018072009-09-11T10:04:40.759-07:002009-09-11T10:04:40.759-07:00That karma. She sho' do get around!I love the ...That karma. She sho' do get around!<br><br>I love the way you open and close the piece, bringing us full circle. A lot happens, but none of it feels rushed. A really enjoyable read!Nettahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05660181882760446931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-70854516457070600182009-09-11T12:28:08.531-07:002009-09-11T12:28:08.531-07:00I'll echo the sentiment of the full circle in ...I'll echo the sentiment of the full circle in this story. I enjoyed that, as well as the story as a whole. Excellent read!Eric J. Krausehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-52609414006214269422009-09-11T12:56:29.968-07:002009-09-11T12:56:29.968-07:00I liked it a lot!Apparently, Marco is the Charlie ...I liked it a lot!<br><br>Apparently, Marco is the Charlie (a la Charlie's Angels) of the gangster world. We'll probably never get to see him, just his effects. :)ganymederhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-17275904173437185762009-09-11T18:29:01.742-07:002009-09-11T18:29:01.742-07:00Marco is a hell of a guy. Great story.Marco is a hell of a guy. Great story.Chris Chartrandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09766438158698041660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-83682796954031474002009-09-11T21:18:04.068-07:002009-09-11T21:18:04.068-07:00If your boss is too charming, ** red alert - dange...If your boss is too charming, ** red alert - danger! ** lol! A lot happens in a short space - I like the compactness and the completeness - well done!PJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07521953491880916840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-48739679043978446452009-09-12T00:53:29.058-07:002009-09-12T00:53:29.058-07:00Thanks for the comments peeps!Thanks for the comments peeps!Anton Gullyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14588240500026033295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-75090323676527784922009-09-12T08:28:32.156-07:002009-09-12T08:28:32.156-07:00Wow, Marco is thorough! Nice, tight little bit of ...Wow, Marco is thorough! Nice, tight little bit of entertainment, enjoyed it.shannon espositohttp://murderinparadise.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-57128376534743168832009-09-12T09:07:52.813-07:002009-09-12T09:07:52.813-07:00Ahhh twisty twist. I am always pulling for badASS ...Ahhh twisty twist. I am always pulling for badASS chicks, but you killed her off.<br><br>Damn, it ;-)<br>~2Tomara Armstronghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-27847535227338343022009-09-12T09:48:28.975-07:002009-09-12T09:48:28.975-07:00[claps in glee] I loved this!!![claps in glee] I loved this!!!Carriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-53558689069868376552009-09-12T14:46:44.212-07:002009-09-12T14:46:44.212-07:00Too bad the kick-ass broad had to go.Too bad the kick-ass broad had to go.Mark Kerstetterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4753392168082086487.post-88429853344883099892009-09-12T20:37:28.180-07:002009-09-12T20:37:28.180-07:00This was great. I love the double double cross. Ni...This was great. I love the double double cross. Nice tight writing too.<br>~jonJ. M. 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